剑桥MSE丨KET / PET写作小技巧之开头篇

良好的开端是好作文的一半

同理良好的结尾也是好作文的必要条件

结尾处写得好

不仅能起总结全文的作用

更能起到画龙点睛、提分的效果

所以开头结尾皆不可疏忽

接下来和王老师一起来看今日内容吧

①Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

We should have food that is easy to eat like pizza or chips. Those are foods you eat with your hands.

Take care,

Ashley

②Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

Ashley

这两篇文章的差异主要体现在结尾上

①的结尾更有亲近感，也使文章内容更加丰富

②就给人一种作文草草了事的感觉

会使老师对这篇作文的印象和感觉大打折扣！因此，在书信类作文中,我们最好在结尾加上问候语以及能够升华和总结的句子,这样才能使作文内容更加饱满，更有色彩。

接下来为同学们提供一篇优秀作文供大家参考，王老师建议先自己练习下再参考范文哦！

练习+参考范文●●

Dear Jo,

Thank you for your kind words. I really enjoy geography and I am looking forward to working with you on our presentation.

I would rather do the presentation on deserts because it’s more unique than rivers. Deserts have such odd animals and plants that live in them because of the harsh climate.

To make the presentation more interesting, we could make a display with sand and some cacti. My mom has some plants we could use.

I can’t come to your house on Tuesday, but I could come on Wednesday after school. Is this okay with you?

Talk to you soon

Mary